Bridal Sky

The pink blushes of the morning sky –

Like a bride doing her make-up,

And by the time she’s done,

My face too completely lights up.*

* Something about this poem was nagging me all day yesterday. At night, figured out what it was and changed it – the last line, from ‘I too completely wake up’ to the present one. The earlier wasn’t going with the theme I had built up, of the bride getting ready. This one, hopefully, works better. Those who liked the earlier one, feel free to unlike that – and like this version. 😉

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